Sunday, April 8, 2007

Stargate: Preservation


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THE LAST FLEET. Concept: The concept of this episode is set for Stargate Atlantis. A few Ancients left Atlantis to stay behind on an Ancient outpost. Lt. Colonel Carter to McKay’s astonishment finds this out post in the Asgard knowledge base. She investigates some more and pin points its location and Lt Colonel Sheppard’s team goes to investigate along with Colonel Carter. As they soon discover that this out post was a Lantean design but was not of Atlantis’s former outpost planets.

Upon landing in the Outpost ferrying by Puddle Jumper via the Daedalus in orbit around the planet. McKay finds a fleet of ships that were dispatched to the Asgard Galaxy from the out post but never reached there destination as logs are cross checked with the corresponding Asgard meetings and events dictate. They take Daedalus abroad into Deep Space along the plotted course in the Ancient Outpost flight log.

They then come across the Nox and Asgard well a displeased faction of Nox and Asgard a float in space sending out an alarming distress call.


Earth is the fifth race according to the Asgard as Lt. Colonel Carter explains to Colonel Caldwell in agreement with Lt. Colonel Sheppard decide to respond
The Nox explain about there Hyper drive failure when fleeing the Wraith to the Asgard as well.

They also explain about there automatic weapons firing system that critically damaged 3 of the 5 ships that were part of the Fleet of Ancient ship and that the rest of the ships were destroyed.
The Nox automatically fired upon the Ancient Delegation without knowing they were firing on an allied civilization responding to the distress call.
This was subsequent to the overall damage to there Hyper drive and some other systems like cloaking that they needed to take no chances at possible enemies.

They also explain that the Asgard are too far away from their home galaxy and thought that to preserve their allies as a race it was best and to far out to go on or go back to stay behind. It is through quite easy negotiations that earth is allowed full access to the remaining 3 ships in hangers. In exchange for help in ferrying the Nox to their collective race. They are allowed to keep the ships.

Earth reciprocates with immediate help for the Nox using 2 Earth Deep Space Carriers the Daedalus and the Apollo along with their ship fixed. The person most directly responsible for fixing of the Nox ship is Dr. Zelenka and is given special praise from the Nox.
They Asgard go to earth with their allies for assistance although as their the last of their race and have never come into conact with earth directly they are cautious and very secretive.

Then earth realises that although they have made the alliance with the Asgard and the Nox the Asgard and the Nox have not been all to truthful about their survival and that the ships are useless because apart from the engines there is nothing useful in the ships as their parts and systems like shields, weapons and life support generators have been used and or broken in the ships.

Earths leaders and the I.O.A are not too worried because now they have more ships even if they have to install only Asgard systems they don’t have to worry about building the ships from scratch like they do with most other earth ships. Though they do however intend to work on the ships structure anyway to bring the to and past the standard of earth ships.

Although one ship is given to the Atlantis expedition fully equipped to the standard equal to the Daedalus its given a new status its new status is not Lantean warship it is now called the "Pegasus".

The other two ships are given special shields and lots more rail guns as the new Asgard energy weapon aboard the Odyssey is not yet adaptable to earth ships as the new Asgards, the remaining Asgards who were in stasis are not smart enough to adapt so quickly to the new technology and are also busy trying to clone themselves to sustain there race. They will not die of the Asgard plagued of physical degeneration as they have been in stasis there physical degeneration will not occur as they are not of they generation of the recent Asgard.


The Asgard clone more than their needed bodies to make way for some of the recently indisposed counterparts such as Thor and their Asgard Emperor Isis .
As his Emperor negotiates with Earths leaders directly for some of their technology back Thor then has more time to research their physical degeneration, and prolong his race with the help of other Asgard who he helps into becoming smarter and up to date with their technology.

Thor and the Asgard are given the Apollo as their new ship which will ferry them to a lonely planet directly in between Atlantis and Earth on the very outskirts of both the Milky Way and the Pegasus galaxy a planet that has only recently been found almost directly between Pegasus and the Milky Way 15 light years from the intergalactic gateway with no Stargate.


The Asgard are then given Cargo Ships which will help them ferry to the intergalactic gateway and back. Then they turn their attention to rebuilding their civilization.


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